Here is a piece of writing from Izzy:
"The bee hive might get too full of bees because too many more are born. It might get small. Half of the swarm will have to go to a new home before they go. They have to make a new Queen bee. The old Queen bee will go with them and they have to make a new bee hive. They will need pollen. Bees can sting. I have been stung by a bee."
Izzy has included some information that she learnt about the bees and why they swarm. I really like how she has finished her writing by including some personal voice about her experiences with bees.
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